Everglades Fishing – Captain Ned Small

June 18, 2010

Haiku Contest

Filed under: Everglades Fishing — Captain Ned Small @ 3:46 pm

Three lines, five, seven, and five syllables respectively. The winner gets a free fishing trip. I know you’re a bunch of raunchy basstits, but here’s an example anyway.

a slow tarpon rolls
all eye and grey comet scales
it’s your turn to cast

14 Comments »

  1. My wife and I had a lot of fun thinking up this one.

    Polarized eyes scan
    Watery glare mud bottom
    Skiff rides on the tide

    Everglades hot sun
    Shadow under mangrove limb
    Purple fly strip, Strike!

    Come tight, set the hook
    Surge, silvery jump, shake, splash
    Fly and fish now free

    Catch your breath, smile proud
    Pole quiet to next lagoon
    More than fish we seek

    And just for laughs….

    Locals sip and smoke
    Cold beer fuels rowdy lies
    Leebo’s Rock Bottom bar

    Comment by Brian Beck — June 18, 2010 @ 8:44 pm

  2. run leap royal fish

    for your death is not to be

    hands will set you free

    Comment by Alan Small — June 19, 2010 @ 12:32 pm

  3. Tonic for my soul
    Flyfishing the Everglades
    Simplicity rules

    Comment by Craig Masterman — June 19, 2010 @ 4:32 pm

  4. Steam Launch sounds …..pop, pop
    Watson glides out from the haze
    Chevelier cringes

    Comment by Todd Cox — June 19, 2010 @ 8:33 pm

  5. The toad is now gone
    Backing disappearing fast
    Bow to silver kings

    Comment by Josh — June 19, 2010 @ 10:21 pm

  6. I want to chuck flies
    at big poons with Captain Ned
    and Billy Baroo!!

    Comment by Jason Sullivan — June 22, 2010 @ 11:04 am

  7. These are the two Haikus I made for my father, John McMinn. If either win please let him fish in my stead, as I would be unable to go. Thanks.

    Bow to the Tarpon
    In its majestic presence
    Rolling and jumping

    ———————–

    A man gazes East
    Tarpon form a daisy chain
    The fly rod beckons

    ————————
    -Joe

    Comment by Joe McMinn — June 23, 2010 @ 1:11 am

  8. Silent silver log,
    transformed to crashing fury,
    by feathers’ soft taunt

    Comment by John McMinn — June 28, 2010 @ 6:23 pm

  9. If the judging has begun please disregard this entry. This is for my dad again.

    Waiting for a meal,
    An incandescent shimmer,
    Tails the fleeting fly

    -Joe

    Comment by Joe McMinn — June 28, 2010 @ 7:01 pm

  10. Hey Guys,

    Here’s three more -

    Suspended blackness,
    Mysteriosa missile,
    Vanishes ‘neath my fly.

    Headlights on gravel,
    Grimm’s crab pots, bamboo,
    Portend adventure.

    Wing tips slice water,
    With white stars on your black back,
    Who’d guess you can fly?

    John

    Comment by John McMinn — July 2, 2010 @ 7:40 pm

  11. Here are some from my wife Beverly Minsberg:

    Shimmering silver
    Explodes in the still water
    Gills flared, head shaking

    Mysterious still
    Elusive shiny silver
    Gills in the mangroves

    Long large bright silver
    Shimmering and montionless
    On the mangrove edge

    Bursting forth from the
    still waters, shimmering silver
    Flared gills, head shaking

    Comment by Tom Harding — July 5, 2010 @ 3:38 pm

  12. Some of my own scribblings:

    A woodpecker knocks
    All eyes strain at the shadows
    Which end is the head?

    The Milky Way watches
    The James Bond ride before dawn
    First on point, fish rolls!

    Low low tide at dawn
    Clear of the Zone, now let’s fly!
    CRUNCH – like a googan

    At Boundary Bay
    A tarpon leaps clear outstretched
    Just taking a look

    Cast to the shadow
    Tease it like its a kitten
    Flare, suction -he’s on!

    Comment by Tom Harding — July 5, 2010 @ 3:49 pm

  13. The snook hides below
    mangrove so thick with green leaves
    and swallows my fly

    Comment by Gus Morris — July 6, 2010 @ 12:11 pm

  14. Slow rollers at dawn,
    We creep toward them, tense, sneaking,
    Into their bedroom

    Waves lap untrod beaches,
    While we wait for Gulf cruisers,
    High and happy, northbound

    Line vaults from the deck,
    Roostertailing toward the Gulf,
    Burned fingers, broad smiles

    Comment by John McMinn — July 9, 2010 @ 7:08 am

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